Waking before the alarm clock

the moon-filled sky grey
beyond the cold windowpane
your mouth soft with sleep

I watch you dreaming
your still face alabaster
in the almost light

the curve of your arm
gently flows across the rise
and fall of your breath

the palest morning
tiny hairs translucent
the dip of your spine

7 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Steve
    Oct 18, 2012 @ 12:32:17

    These haikus are sick, and are also entirely relevant to the work I’m making at the moment. Keep at it man, they’re sweet.

    Reply

    • Whimsy Mimsy
      Oct 18, 2012 @ 16:43:46

      🙂 Thanks! Am I right in that you are doing photo haiku of sorts? The pictures are fantastic!

      Reply

      • Steve
        Oct 22, 2012 @ 09:10:40

        Yes the idea behind my images is inspired by haiku as, being at art school, I fancied trying something new. I wouldn’t mind a little collaboration with some of your own particular work. If you’re at all interested contact me through my blog (email should be there somewhere) as I think your work is great!

        Reply

  2. billgncs
    Oct 18, 2012 @ 18:06:21

    beautiful…..

    Reply

So talk to me, baby ...

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: