one tall pine tree stands
pressed flat against the night sky
standing watch alone
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a few words spewing from my soul…
12 Nov 2012 19 Comments
in poetry
one tall pine tree stands
pressed flat against the night sky
standing watch alone
whimsy~mimsy 
Nov 12, 2012 @ 01:46:45
dryad warrior queen
shelter one lost and weary heart
rustling needles speak
Nov 12, 2012 @ 02:19:16
🙂 very nice!
Nov 12, 2012 @ 04:31:55
thanks to you for your first haiku
Nov 12, 2012 @ 03:30:59
Great rebuttal.
Nov 12, 2012 @ 04:08:29
all the credit to the original ..
Nov 12, 2012 @ 06:49:16
Sheltered by pine boughs
Within brown rustling needles
A new life begins
Heartbeats under silky fur
We secretly watch in awe
Nov 12, 2012 @ 12:59:58
solemn reflection
sometimes there is only the waiting
who answers our love
Nov 12, 2012 @ 03:30:32
Very nice. I LOVE haikus!
Nov 12, 2012 @ 09:45:54
All night long
The wind in the high pines.
How distant seems my home.
Nov 12, 2012 @ 11:00:38
The lonely wind sings,
Stroking the leafless treetops.
She wanders the earth.
Nov 12, 2012 @ 13:10:36
beautiful
Nov 12, 2012 @ 13:10:14
excellent – I can feel the longing
Nov 12, 2012 @ 11:12:28
Whimsy, I like the way you think and write. We have similar images going through our minds, me thinks. Great poem. 🙂
Nov 12, 2012 @ 15:25:07
Reminds me of home…
Nov 12, 2012 @ 23:13:17
I have one lone pine in the distance, on top of a teeny mountain. The silhouette is so lovely against the mornings.
Nov 12, 2012 @ 23:40:33
Vivid imagery…enjoyed 🙂
Nov 14, 2012 @ 22:34:36
The place beneath the red pines is bare
to the interweaving of red pine needles
and straw grass matted thickly, packed
by the white weight of winter, the making
of duff, a soft cool bed to lie down on
in summer and be thankful for snow.