Woodsmoke
a frosty evening-
the sky
infinitely deep,
a million stars
waiting
to be wished on
the fire hot,
pine tar snapping
too warm for anything-
but naked honesty,
bare truths
your face
gilded in the light,
body dappled by shadows
I remember
the taste
salt and hickory
last embers in the grate
I never loved you more
a candle
only lasts
a measured time
before guttering
into the dark
woodsmoke lingers-
scents of
our bridges burned
Nov 16, 2012 @ 23:06:53
very nice, really liked the two verses separated by “I never loved you more” –
don’t you think that sometimes bridges must be burned?
Nov 17, 2012 @ 00:16:15
Yes. Sometimes that’s the only way to move on. š
Nov 17, 2012 @ 08:08:45
superb
Nov 17, 2012 @ 17:05:53
š thank you! Coming from you that’s a great compliment!
Nov 17, 2012 @ 08:09:01
I love this. š you capture the moment beautifully. Hopefully the candle will last a while longer for you to enjoy.
Nov 17, 2012 @ 17:06:42
Thank you! It’s all in the past, but it was lovely while it lasted. All things in good measure and due time.
Nov 19, 2012 @ 02:28:24
A really excellent poem, full with atmosphere!
Suzy š