longing for the warmth

the snow skifts
across grasses
frozen, disbelief
winter has come
too early

I remember
your hand
summer warm
in last winter’s
deep cold

my hand
chilled, curls
lonely in my pocket

11 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Crimson
    Nov 26, 2012 @ 03:41:10

    Very nice, Whimsy.

    Reply

  2. billgncs
    Nov 26, 2012 @ 09:21:22

    very much enjoy your imagery

    Reply

  3. simonhlilly
    Nov 26, 2012 @ 10:09:48

    Nice last one! Very precise and redolent…

    Reply

  4. johnnycrabcakes
    Nov 29, 2012 @ 05:01:05

    My, yes….what lovely longing…
    i love “skifts”, too…wonderful.

    Reply

  5. Jennifer Adams Teasley
    Nov 29, 2012 @ 05:12:24

    Lovely!!

    Reply

  6. TooFullToWrite
    Feb 15, 2013 @ 12:59:22

    Very charming, like this alot. Your hand wouldn’t be lonely in my pocket, I have gloves, hats and writing implements to keep me company!

    Reply

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