white-water rafting

the river meanders
licking
against curved muddy banks

your lips
on my neck

circling in eddies
pouring
through the canyons,

no life jacket
can’t swim

before roaring full-throated
onto rocks below

can I survive
the fall?

Aside

5 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Rob Salem
    Dec 08, 2012 @ 20:02:25

    I like the blatant subtlety of this one.

    Reply

  2. Anonymous
    Dec 08, 2012 @ 20:38:30

    Soooo sensual. Beautiful imagery 🙂

    Reply

  3. warmginger
    Dec 09, 2012 @ 16:50:34

    Yes!

    Reply

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