taste of salt on your lips

Here goes the next round – have fun all! The challenge is posted here ramblingsfromamum so take a peek! Words are river, salt, and book.

patchwork quilt beneath
stretched out across the grass
just beyond mud
along the banks of an almost river

spine bent
the book lay forgotten
as your lips traveled
up mine

then tasting
the salty nape of my neck
beneath the ringlets
heat left there

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Eric
    Dec 30, 2012 @ 15:12:26

    You are just too hot, Mims! 🙂 Eric


  2. Susan L Daniels
    Dec 30, 2012 @ 22:26:41

    Oh, I so love what you imply, suggest, and weave here. You seduce the reader as the speaker is lit by her lover’s lips.


  3. unfetteredbs
    Dec 30, 2012 @ 22:52:19

    Dear God you ladies are on fire.. pun intended… Susan, Whimsy and Rambly.. oh my my my you ladies. I am not sure my innocent mind can follow you… hee hee


  4. ruleofstupid
    Dec 31, 2012 @ 01:18:01

    We been doing it Bloggy style all night long, yeah yeah!
    This is lovely Mimsy. Somehow I lost track and have missed bits – still better late than never 🙂


  5. johnnycrabcakes
    Dec 31, 2012 @ 07:12:37

    I’m with panda–way to much for my feeble mind to keep up with–bloggy-style (Ugh! Panda!) or not…
    I’m still envisioning “your lips traveled / up mine”…intriguing image..


  6. Miriam E.
    Dec 31, 2012 @ 21:39:14

    mmmh very sensual. love it!


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