Haiku 1.9

Dawn pettily creeps
through my window each morning
stealing precious sleep

my eyelids sewn shut
with remnants of vivid dreams
struggle to be free

last valiant effort
seizing the magic potion
I finally wake up

πŸ™‚ it’s an IV the coffee morning!

12 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. johnnycrabcakes
    Jan 09, 2013 @ 13:35:41

    I have an altered and
    customized insulin pump…

    Reply

  2. unfetteredbs
    Jan 09, 2013 @ 16:04:26

    I wish coffee would just magically appear every morning..

    Reply

  3. warmginger
    Jan 09, 2013 @ 17:35:16

    Hee hee! I’m not even supposed to drink it due to a kidney stone incident a few years back and I have cut down to only drinking it in the morning – admittedly it’s two six-cup cafetieres, but my urologist is so very far away.

    Can I just add a little ranty aside? I can’t stand it when someone says ‘Coffee is my only vice.’ It’s not so much the sanctimonious expression that usually accompanies it, it’s the fact it’s not even a bloody vice!

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  4. billgncs
    Jan 09, 2013 @ 18:54:48

    I was going to write a haiku in response, but I was to drowsy ( smile )

    Reply

  5. ramblingsfromamum
    Jan 09, 2013 @ 20:50:17

    Nice twist there Mimsy – and liked very much. πŸ™‚

    Reply

  6. ruleofstupid
    Jan 09, 2013 @ 22:48:21

    hehe… nice πŸ™‚

    Reply

  7. Leaky Gut Syndrome
    Jan 12, 2013 @ 10:30:43

    its perfect and beautiful post. Great!!! good job..

    Reply

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