children (carpe diem)

three children conspire
to build civilizations
timeless, til they melt

grimy wet kisses
planted on my clean dry cheek
a timeless treasure

18 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. lly1205
    Jan 28, 2013 @ 21:13:21

    This is wonderful, it reminds me of my own childhood!


  2. Eric
    Jan 28, 2013 @ 21:15:22

    Wonder if that was what it was like raising Ham, Shem and Japheth… 😉


  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Jan 28, 2013 @ 21:21:54

    The second haiku is a little treasure.


  4. billgncs
    Jan 28, 2013 @ 22:38:35

    incredibly sloppy
    incurably irritating
    our promise, our hope


  5. simonhlilly
    Jan 28, 2013 @ 23:11:27

    Yep, its the sense data infection of the second haiku that makes it a permanent mental fixture!


  6. unfetteredbs
    Jan 29, 2013 @ 00:03:17

    thanks for the flashback.. it goes quickly doesn’t it


  7. Chevrefeuille
    Jan 29, 2013 @ 11:42:35

    What a treasure you share here with us.


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