inspired by shiki – carpe diem

under the wolf moon
barn owl swoops – talons outstretched-
mouse darts too slowly

 

 

http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/

12 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Shackled and Crowned
    Jan 29, 2013 @ 02:36:04

    Bye bye mouse.

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  2. Look for A Lovely Thing
    Jan 29, 2013 @ 03:16:20

    Nice details! Well done!

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  3. JazzBumpa
    Jan 29, 2013 @ 05:08:11

    That mouse needed Lord Undergrowth.
    Cheers!
    JzB

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  4. kz
    Jan 29, 2013 @ 07:09:15

    poor mouse! ^^ yes, very nice detailed descriptions..

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  5. jrbsays
    Jan 29, 2013 @ 11:04:26

    Strike one for the Owl. Lovely imagery, thank you 🙂

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  6. WabiSabi
    Jan 29, 2013 @ 18:09:12

    I have never seen an owl and wish I would before I die. Your haiku gave me a wonderful image in the meantime!!

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  7. 4joy
    Jan 29, 2013 @ 18:33:39

    2 predators – the wolf and the owl….nicely done

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  8. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Jan 29, 2013 @ 20:43:47

    Strong poetry. Poor mouse.

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  9. Chevrefeuille
    Jan 30, 2013 @ 12:09:58

    I love this one … strong in it’s nature imagery … yeah poor mouse

    Reply

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