the brilliant sunshine
is small comfort
with bitter winds
biting at my ankles
and too long til spring

9 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. johncoyote
    Feb 18, 2013 @ 17:41:39

    I agree. Too long for the coming of the Spring warm days. A excellent poem.


  2. billgncs
    Feb 18, 2013 @ 17:53:26

    why is spring so fleeting and winter so enduring ?


  3. billgncs
    Feb 19, 2013 @ 01:06:29

    perhaps the bitter cold hardens us
    that in spring’s softness
    we can change


  4. jenlefeverwood
    Feb 19, 2013 @ 05:52:41

    Yep! I have spring fever bad this year!! Spring takes forever to get here.. January & February are my least fav months!! The least… ~Jen


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