taste of the ocean

as the rain ends
the earth offers up
its rich, loamy breath

mantled by darkness
I lay awake
breathing in its scent

as you lay beside me
bonelessly dreaming
and I wish for the ocean

the wind becomes the sound
of waves crashing, I taste
my tears salty as the sea.

Thanks, Phill, for the inspiration! To read his – click here

8 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ray Sharp
    Feb 19, 2013 @ 01:11:00

    this is beautiful, miss mimsy


  2. Phillip Barker
    Feb 19, 2013 @ 03:47:31

    A pleasure to :”inspire”

    I think we need a long discussion on “bonelessly” though,


  3. warmginger
    Feb 19, 2013 @ 09:31:30

    Beautiful. And in audio, prickles of salty tears in my eyes. ๐Ÿ™‚


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