as the rain ends
the earth offers up
its rich, loamy breath
mantled by darkness
I lay awake
breathing in its scent
as you lay beside me
bonelessly dreaming
and I wish for the ocean
the wind becomes the sound
of waves crashing, I taste
my tears salty as the sea.
Thanks, Phill, for the inspiration! To read his – click here
Feb 19, 2013 @ 01:11:00
this is beautiful, miss mimsy
Feb 19, 2013 @ 01:18:59
Thank you, Bard!
Feb 19, 2013 @ 03:47:31
A pleasure to :”inspire”
I think we need a long discussion on “bonelessly” though,
Feb 19, 2013 @ 03:48:17
๐ only if you write a poem on awesome. ๐
Feb 19, 2013 @ 03:55:13
Then best we just remain silent on the subject… or not:
words, degrading like rusty nails
full of awe becomes… that’s nice
beige repartee saps language
of its essential awesomeness….
now – about bonelessly…
Feb 19, 2013 @ 04:01:05
what about it – its a great word. ๐ Almost bordering on awe… ๐
Feb 19, 2013 @ 09:31:30
Beautiful. And in audio, prickles of salty tears in my eyes. ๐
Feb 20, 2013 @ 21:36:48
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