the window in my living room

It is double paned glass between us –
insulation, protection in the small space
with air trapped motionless.
You see my lips moving on the other side
without hearing what I am actually saying.

4 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Wendell A. Brown
    Mar 06, 2013 @ 05:42:03

    I always love the way your heart speaks!


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  3. Stephen Kellogg
    Mar 06, 2013 @ 13:21:04

    Ok Whimsy,
    Not quite my normal mirrored response, but I took elements and tried to relay the same feeling…
    Hope it works for you. Thanks for another poem inspiring poem.




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