you first kissed me
in front of the porch light
our entwined shadows stretching
far into the gloaming
where the fireflies twinkled
Thanks Bard for the shadows…
a few words spewing from my soul…
18 Mar 2013 14 Comments
in gogyohka, poetry Tags: early love, fireflies, first kiss, shadows, summer evenings
you first kissed me
in front of the porch light
our entwined shadows stretching
far into the gloaming
where the fireflies twinkled
Thanks Bard for the shadows…
Mar 18, 2013 @ 01:18:19
gloaming – such a fine word. I think fireflies shine on dream power and magic.
Mar 18, 2013 @ 01:32:58
I agree. Groovy word.
Mar 18, 2013 @ 01:41:47
Very nice! And I agree, ‘gloaming’ is nice tiouch.
Mar 18, 2013 @ 01:43:09
‘touch’
Mar 18, 2013 @ 03:21:37
Oh, I love the images you paint with your words.
Mar 18, 2013 @ 14:52:21
Yes, I had to look that word up. I admit it. I am a heathen! 😉 If you paint images with words, dear, then I believe that you dabbed the tip of your brush into the shade called Love… You have a wonderful writing style, Mims. Your choice of words reflect a thousand shades meaning in just a few stanzas. You must be an elven princess… 🙂 E
Mar 18, 2013 @ 16:45:57
🙂 Eric, you have such a flowering, silvered tongue. I swear you must cut quite the swath through the ladies…
Thank you.
And no way – I’m much to big to be that. 🙂 LOL Besides, if I was a princess, I’d have to have manners and wear shoes. 🙂
Mar 18, 2013 @ 18:01:01
all the elven princesses I know are barefoot and eat with their fingers… 😉
Mar 19, 2013 @ 20:10:50
Perfect!
Mar 19, 2013 @ 20:20:43
Just what I was thinking, Mims! 😉
Mar 18, 2013 @ 20:42:26
A beautiful memory.
Mar 19, 2013 @ 00:49:46
lovely summer evening. You do so much with so little. Wonderful
Mar 19, 2013 @ 20:09:26
Thank you!!