you first kissed me
in front of the porch light
our entwined shadows stretching
far into the gloaming
where the fireflies twinkled
Thanks Bard for the shadows…
a july evening
18 Mar 2013 14 Comments
in gogyohka, poetry Tags: early love, fireflies, first kiss, shadows, summer evenings
whimsy~mimsy 
Mar 18, 2013 @ 01:18:19
gloaming – such a fine word. I think fireflies shine on dream power and magic.
Mar 18, 2013 @ 01:32:58
I agree. Groovy word.
Mar 18, 2013 @ 01:41:47
Very nice! And I agree, ‘gloaming’ is nice tiouch.
Mar 18, 2013 @ 01:43:09
‘touch’
Mar 18, 2013 @ 03:21:37
Oh, I love the images you paint with your words.
Mar 18, 2013 @ 14:52:21
Yes, I had to look that word up. I admit it. I am a heathen! 😉 If you paint images with words, dear, then I believe that you dabbed the tip of your brush into the shade called Love… You have a wonderful writing style, Mims. Your choice of words reflect a thousand shades meaning in just a few stanzas. You must be an elven princess… 🙂 E
Mar 18, 2013 @ 16:45:57
🙂 Eric, you have such a flowering, silvered tongue. I swear you must cut quite the swath through the ladies…
Thank you.
And no way – I’m much to big to be that. 🙂 LOL Besides, if I was a princess, I’d have to have manners and wear shoes. 🙂
Mar 18, 2013 @ 18:01:01
all the elven princesses I know are barefoot and eat with their fingers… 😉
Mar 19, 2013 @ 20:10:50
Perfect!
Mar 19, 2013 @ 20:20:43
Just what I was thinking, Mims! 😉
Mar 18, 2013 @ 20:42:26
A beautiful memory.
Mar 19, 2013 @ 00:49:46
lovely summer evening. You do so much with so little. Wonderful
Mar 19, 2013 @ 20:09:26
Thank you!!