fermenting

acrimonious words sting
depths of stomach
sweetly given chocolates
melt-smoothly-in-the-same-mouth luscious
now curdle bitterly

13 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Alice Keys
    Apr 01, 2013 @ 02:01:40

    Dang Easter candy. Melts in the mouth and curdles the stomach.;-) Alice

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  2. sustainabilitea
    Apr 01, 2013 @ 02:14:31

    Nothing worse than curdled chocolate! What a waste!

    Hope your day was like dark chocolate that didn’t curdle.

    janet
    P.S. haiku alert for my post today

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  3. monocochlearmutineer
    Apr 01, 2013 @ 03:41:45

    Easter’s after-taste, perhaps?

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  4. Eric
    Apr 01, 2013 @ 13:11:32

    Fair Mims, we must take the bitter with the sweet. Chocolates, of course! 😉

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  5. slpmartin
    Apr 01, 2013 @ 18:35:20

    There are somethings that chocolates cannot repair…a lot said in a few lines.

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  6. I HAVE A VOICE
    Apr 02, 2013 @ 02:39:40

    such a difficult task!

    Reply

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