gogyoka

We are walking together
connected at the hand
in the warm afternoon sun –
the air between us colder
than the worst of winter’s winds.

14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Alice Keys
    Apr 07, 2013 @ 19:15:07

    Lovely and rich.

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  2. Shackled and Crowned
    Apr 07, 2013 @ 20:21:44

    Aw. Special hand holding.
    It’s been a long time since I’ve interlocked hands with someone.

    Reply

  3. Eric
    Apr 07, 2013 @ 20:29:02

    That was a Poe ending, dear. I just love it. The way you shut the door. A Nevermore… 😀

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  4. johnnycrabcakes
    Apr 08, 2013 @ 02:23:25

    Is this what happens when the the elephant becomes and absence in the room…?

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  5. johnnycrabcakes
    Apr 08, 2013 @ 02:35:17

    *an absence* supposed to say…
    yes, an elephant-sized void…do we speak, once again of larger and lesser infinities…?
    …I think the “gogyoka” is calling to me…

    Reply

  6. typewriterpoet
    Apr 08, 2013 @ 04:49:30

    This got me right in the heart.

    Reply

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