paper,
angle, bend, crease
toward then away –
following prescribed steps,
crane, of sorts
dog-eared words
folded down, revisited
as we move towards, away
mouthing words we are supposed to say
a paper marriage
a few words spewing from my soul…
12 Apr 2013 20 Comments
paper,
angle, bend, crease
toward then away –
following prescribed steps,
crane, of sorts
dog-eared words
folded down, revisited
as we move towards, away
mouthing words we are supposed to say
a paper marriage
Apr 12, 2013 @ 05:22:39
Sigh this feels very personal, Whimsy.
Apr 12, 2013 @ 22:50:00
what is it the bible says…a time for every season?
Apr 12, 2013 @ 10:30:51
And left in the end creased by it all,
Jim
Apr 12, 2013 @ 22:49:40
exactly.
Apr 12, 2013 @ 15:07:49
Wow…that last line was quite powerful.
Apr 12, 2013 @ 22:49:25
Thank you 🙂
Apr 12, 2013 @ 16:12:06
I really like the concept of “emotional origami”. Who gets to do the folding and what shape are you left in?
Apr 12, 2013 @ 20:59:15
Mmm hmm. Exactly. 🙂
Apr 12, 2013 @ 20:28:35
I feel pain here that I pray isn’t real to you.
janet
Apr 12, 2013 @ 22:48:12
Thank you.
Apr 12, 2013 @ 21:19:59
Just nominated you for an award…. http://poeticshrapnels.wordpress.com/2013/04/12/270/
Cheers Mate
Apr 12, 2013 @ 23:23:06
That was one of your best, Mims. Now you know why my marriages failed. Yes. Origami. All of my origami look like a lopsided duck. That’s because, if I didn’t duck, I’d be lopsided! 😉
Apr 12, 2013 @ 23:37:28
🙂 well – its kind of like Alice said – who picks the design and does the folding…and who gets folded and creased…
Apr 13, 2013 @ 01:38:51
I folded because I only had one joker. 😉
Apr 13, 2013 @ 01:53:42
ha 🙂 I can see you making airplanes, folding dollar bills into roses for the ladies…
Apr 13, 2013 @ 12:58:00
😀
Apr 12, 2013 @ 23:54:58
very original !
Apr 14, 2013 @ 01:16:58
Thank you 🙂
Apr 14, 2013 @ 00:13:59
softly I say..wow
Apr 14, 2013 @ 01:17:15
thank you – i think …