dripping from the eaves
remnants of thunderous storm
in the bathroom sink
leaky faucet echoing
reminders of nature’s power
rain tanka
12 Apr 2013 10 Comments
in poetry, tanka Tags: dripping faucet, rain, storm
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whimsy~mimsy 
Apr 12, 2013 @ 16:10:35
Water is very powerful in all its forms: thunderstorm or finding its way past plumbing gaskets. Alice
Apr 12, 2013 @ 22:49:15
Ha yes – I’d like to say that the plumbing wasn’t true…
Apr 12, 2013 @ 20:27:39
I like the way you linked the outdoor and indoor, nature and “civilization.”
janet
Apr 12, 2013 @ 22:48:34
🙂 I was working towards that – I’m glad you got it!
Apr 12, 2013 @ 23:26:50
Now I know what you’re mad at hubby about. Hasn’t fixed that leaky faucet, huh? 😉 Nice imagery, Mims.
Apr 12, 2013 @ 23:37:48
haha I’m not mad. I fixed the faucet.
Apr 13, 2013 @ 01:39:24
Versatile lady!
Apr 13, 2013 @ 03:28:27
rain tank – you’re a hoot
Apr 13, 2013 @ 03:57:59
🙂 hehe
Apr 13, 2013 @ 13:36:55
You know I didn’t get that either til you said it 😉