I wanted to write
about the rain on the leaves
but the words blew away
like the clouds and the storms
and my trash can last night
Wind
13 Apr 2013 19 Comments
in gogyohka, poetry Tags: NoPoMo
a few words spewing from my soul…
13 Apr 2013 19 Comments
in gogyohka, poetry Tags: NoPoMo
I wanted to write
about the rain on the leaves
but the words blew away
like the clouds and the storms
and my trash can last night
Apr 13, 2013 @ 02:03:11
They do fly away rather quickly sometimes.
Apr 13, 2013 @ 02:14:59
🙂 garbage all down the road lol…doesn’t help that the animals around here help disperse either!
Apr 13, 2013 @ 02:17:30
We had a bear get into ours a few nights ago. Garbage and bear poop makes for a grand wake up call 🙂
Apr 13, 2013 @ 02:19:30
🙂 we get that – plus raccoons, neighbor’s dogs down the road… 🙂
Apr 13, 2013 @ 02:20:34
Raccoons are the absolute worst. My condolences
Apr 13, 2013 @ 02:22:09
haha 🙂 yes. I agree!
Although the bear that sat on my porch and pooped last year was pretty awesome.
Apr 13, 2013 @ 02:23:25
Haaaa so gross!! Sooo large
Apr 13, 2013 @ 02:24:31
so … berry-licious hahaha
Apr 13, 2013 @ 02:50:51
this is adorable.
Apr 13, 2013 @ 03:31:39
The trash can blowing away was funny. Thanks for one more laugh tonight.
Apr 13, 2013 @ 08:54:33
Whose soft words
Sweeping through
My mind’s cool edge,
I wonder?
Sound of distant rain.
Sound of distant rain.
Something seems forgotten:
Cool emptiness,
A taste of sorrow.
A taste of sorrow
For no reason
That I know.
Mantra of compassion.
Mantra of compassion.
Wind and rain
Blowing away
Ephemeral things.
Apr 13, 2013 @ 13:29:13
🙂 that was lovely, especially the second stanza.
Apr 13, 2013 @ 14:36:37
Taa!
Apr 13, 2013 @ 09:52:53
This is fantastic. The imagery is great in this poem!!!!
Apr 13, 2013 @ 13:18:08
ha ha ha ha
Apr 13, 2013 @ 13:26:15
🙂 better than the animal. Wind strewn is easier to pick up.
Apr 13, 2013 @ 18:23:09
Ah, that sound of a night in gale
Apr 14, 2013 @ 01:25:36
Oh, I love that ending. It made it all so real!
Apr 14, 2013 @ 01:30:52
🙂 thanks – and you can come pick it up for me next time lol