a few words spewing from my soul…
17 May 2013 10 Comments
by Whimsy Mimsy in haiku, poetry
dandelion stems tall over newly cut grass lawn’s evening shadow
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billgncs May 17, 2013 @ 02:29:34
the wind disperses them like hopes and dreams despite our best plans
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Whimsy Mimsy May 17, 2013 @ 02:50:04
white dandelions scattered across the front lawn wind blowing wishes
simonhlilly May 17, 2013 @ 12:05:38
As it is. Just right.
Whimsy Mimsy May 18, 2013 @ 15:55:45
🙂 thank you. From you, high praise indeed.
simonhlilly May 19, 2013 @ 08:17:28
Well, you know, I am very particular (fussy) about haikuesque verse…..but,in the end,it is just that I like what I like….
Whimsy Mimsy May 20, 2013 @ 08:16:04
🙂
Simon, you picky? No. I would never 🙂
I appreciate all of your insight. 🙂
simonhlilly May 20, 2013 @ 08:22:23
I appreciate the appreciation!
slpmartin May 18, 2013 @ 05:23:12
Just delightful…I could see this image well.
Whimsy Mimsy May 18, 2013 @ 15:24:37
Thanks! As I was taking the kids to the bus, the sun was glinting off the long stalks that never seem to stay cut and that’s what it looked like lol
agjorgenson May 20, 2013 @ 02:42:55
like the haiku don’t like the flower…
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whimsy~mimsy 
May 17, 2013 @ 02:29:34
the wind disperses them
like hopes and dreams
despite our best plans
May 17, 2013 @ 02:50:04
white dandelions
scattered across the front lawn
wind blowing wishes
May 17, 2013 @ 12:05:38
As it is. Just right.
May 18, 2013 @ 15:55:45
🙂 thank you. From you, high praise indeed.
May 19, 2013 @ 08:17:28
Well, you know, I am very particular (fussy) about haikuesque verse…..but,in the end,it is just that I like what I like….
May 20, 2013 @ 08:16:04
🙂
Simon, you picky? No. I would never 🙂
I appreciate all of your insight. 🙂
May 20, 2013 @ 08:22:23
I appreciate the appreciation!
May 18, 2013 @ 05:23:12
Just delightful…I could see this image well.
May 18, 2013 @ 15:24:37
Thanks! As I was taking the kids to the bus, the sun was glinting off the long stalks that never seem to stay cut and that’s what it looked like lol
May 20, 2013 @ 02:42:55
like the haiku don’t like the flower…