haiku

dandelion stems
tall over newly cut grass
lawn’s evening shadow

10 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. billgncs
    May 17, 2013 @ 02:29:34

    the wind disperses them
    like hopes and dreams
    despite our best plans

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  2. simonhlilly
    May 17, 2013 @ 12:05:38

    As it is. Just right.

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  3. slpmartin
    May 18, 2013 @ 05:23:12

    Just delightful…I could see this image well.

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  4. agjorgenson
    May 20, 2013 @ 02:42:55

    like the haiku don’t like the flower…

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