the fog lays heavy
in the hollows;
your hand on my waist
even as we sleep

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Miriam E.
    May 29, 2013 @ 11:22:36

    so beautiful! love this one


  2. lucidwritingandvisuals
    May 30, 2013 @ 01:31:20

    Love this one! Love how the word ‘hollows’ echoes the hollow of a waist. Nice!



  3. vishalbheeroo
    May 30, 2013 @ 16:37:45

    hey, it’s such a beautiful poem.


  4. Dish With Clarissa
    May 31, 2013 @ 23:42:23


So talk to me, baby ...

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