the fog lays heavy
in the hollows;
your hand on my waist
even as we sleep
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29 May 2013 6 Comments
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a few words spewing from my soul…
29 May 2013 6 Comments
in poetry
the fog lays heavy
in the hollows;
your hand on my waist
even as we sleep
whimsy~mimsy 
May 29, 2013 @ 11:22:36
so beautiful! love this one
May 30, 2013 @ 01:31:20
Love this one! Love how the word ‘hollows’ echoes the hollow of a waist. Nice!
:Lucy
May 30, 2013 @ 09:23:14
🙂 thank you! That’s exactly where I was going with it. I actually had the word hollow in there twice at first 🙂
May 30, 2013 @ 16:37:45
hey, it’s such a beautiful poem.
Cheers
Vishal
May 30, 2013 @ 20:13:07
Thank you!!!
May 31, 2013 @ 23:42:23
Hi Doll
I wanted you to have this….
http://dishingitoutwithclarissa.com/2013/05/31/one-lovely-blog-award/