5.5 haiku sonnet

from two yards over
the lawnmower still buzzes
after the sunset

we watch bats swooping
their silent acrobatics
a tango at dusk

the cicadas sing
over our conversation
drowning out the words

I watch your tongue flick
gathering the amber drops
along the smooth rim

we sip tequila slowly
warmed more by heated glances

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Frank J. Tassone
    May 05, 2021 @ 22:41:16

    Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
    #Haiku Happenings #2: Whimsy Mimsy’s latest haiku #sonnet!


  2. sustainabilitea
    May 06, 2021 @ 02:52:20

    Beautiful (and I see someone’s mowing down those dandelions.) 🙂



  3. Holly Lofgreen
    May 06, 2021 @ 22:53:22

    Very visual. Beautiful. I can see those bats making their eccentric arcs through the dusk. And I can hear the lawnmower.


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