As we talk

Your voice
runs along the edges
of my spine, pooling
at the base deep with
descriptions of gardens,
Koi ponds,
techniques for finding magic
four-leaf clovers
for getting lucky
and for making me
fall in love with you.

10 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Renard Moreau
    May 10, 2013 @ 20:25:37

    [ Smiles ] Your poem is a beautiful one!


  2. Seb
    May 10, 2013 @ 21:51:00

    This made me smile. The technique for getting lucky is hard to master!


  3. jenlefeverwood
    May 10, 2013 @ 23:21:00

    Beautiful. XO


  4. Ray Sharp
    May 11, 2013 @ 01:27:42

    i really like the way this poem develops, the listed series after “…with”
    and the ending after “and for”
    very well assembled, just the right pacing and strong ending
    a classic


  5. Heartafire
    May 11, 2013 @ 18:30:49

    Fine writing!


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