Your voice
runs along the edges
of my spine, pooling
at the base deep with
descriptions of gardens,
Koi ponds,
techniques for finding magic
four-leaf clovers
for getting lucky
and for making me
fall in love with you.
As we talk
10 May 2013 10 Comments
in poetry
whimsy~mimsy 
May 10, 2013 @ 20:25:37
[ Smiles ] Your poem is a beautiful one!
May 11, 2013 @ 15:54:06
Thank you!
May 11, 2013 @ 15:58:55
[ Smiles ] You are welcome!
May 10, 2013 @ 21:51:00
This made me smile. The technique for getting lucky is hard to master!
May 11, 2013 @ 02:23:28
Hehe yeah. I’m a master at finding 4 leaf clovers. Not so much the getting lucky part 🙂 for both I’m certain it’s all in the angles.
Thanks!
May 10, 2013 @ 23:21:00
Beautiful. XO
May 11, 2013 @ 02:25:41
Thanks! How have you been? I’ve not been around enough lately!
May 11, 2013 @ 01:27:42
i really like the way this poem develops, the listed series after “…with”
and the ending after “and for”
very well assembled, just the right pacing and strong ending
a classic
May 11, 2013 @ 02:24:17
Thank you! I appreciate your insights always. 🙂
May 11, 2013 @ 18:30:49
Fine writing!