soft, raspy with sleep
your voice cracking as you paint
breath strokes on my neck
~
reddened from the sun
even your white cotton sheets
rasp against my skin
~
a calloused hand
rasps across my belly
slips under the lace
~
your teeth rasp against
my finger drawn from your mouth
the wetness glistens
whimsy~mimsy 
Jul 27, 2012 @ 03:27:06
Hi,
You write good poetry up here, so please keep penning and keep inspiring! 🙂
I would like to thank you for following my blog. I hope my blog doesn’t disappoint you and that your visits in my blog have been and will always be a joyful ride.
Thank you again and I wish you a lovely day! 🙂
Subhan Zein
Jul 27, 2012 @ 04:08:03
Thank you 🙂
I’ve been writing a couple years, but took a break for the last 2 – just a little over that time.
I loved your work – that’s why I followed. Keep sharing as well!
Jul 28, 2012 @ 02:50:51
I like your use of the language in the poem. Made the poem a pleasure to read and enjoy.
Jul 28, 2012 @ 02:52:42
Thank you 🙂 I appreciate your reading, and your thoughts on it!
Aug 01, 2012 @ 19:57:50
Well written! Economical but expressive.
Aug 01, 2012 @ 20:04:44
Thank you! 🙂