Louie

limbs bare in the morning light
sketched charcoal
as they stretch against
the blush of the waking horizon
Louie croons softly

“It’s a wonderful world”
your lips whisper
against the nape of my neck
your hand gently cups my breast
as vestiges of warm dreams slip away

15 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. redjim99
    Feb 25, 2013 @ 12:25:57

    Dreams, very slow and languid.

    Jim

    Reply

  2. prewitt1970
    Feb 25, 2013 @ 13:26:17

    Such a cozy place to be Im sure. Beautifully written.

    Reply

  3. deanabo
    Feb 25, 2013 @ 17:48:20

    I really like this!

    Reply

  4. billgncs
    Feb 25, 2013 @ 21:21:44

    how’s the song end? “And I think to myself… what a wonderful world…”

    Reply

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  6. jenlefeverwood
    Mar 14, 2013 @ 00:37:09

    Beautiful. I knew there is a reason why I have you in my in box!! I don’t like to miss one of your pieces Miss Whimsy… πŸ™‚ XO

    Reply

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