haiku

11 Jun 2013 14 Comments

by Whimsy Mimsy in poetry

without pale moonlight
shadows absorb all landmarks
I am lost at sea

14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. billgncs
    Jun 11, 2013 @ 04:15:25

    sometimes we are all lost, but dawn brings hope.

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  2. Phillip Barker
    Jun 11, 2013 @ 05:37:16

    ahhhhh

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  3. Alice Keys
    Jun 17, 2013 @ 19:48:35

    Heartfelt lost at sea. There are days like that. 😉

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    • Whimsy Mimsy
      Jun 26, 2013 @ 12:02:28

      How are you??

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      • Alice Keys
        Jun 28, 2013 @ 15:43:50

        I’m very happy, a tiny bit jet lagged and have very tired feet.

        All is becoming better, hour by hour. We are on a steep learning curve. We walk our feet off every day. My French is coming along.

        We’re eating ourselves silly. This country believes butter and cheese, cream and bread are good for you. How can I argue with that? ;-))

        I’m weepy happy like I lived here in another lifetime and finally made it back home. 🙂

        Alice

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        • Whimsy Mimsy
          Jun 28, 2013 @ 22:40:53

          Oh that is so fantastic…:) I understand the feeling of home, of being centered in your environment. 🙂 I haven’t made it to my place yet, but I know what you mean.

          Be well!! It sounds like you are already happy! : )

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  5. Stephen Kellogg
    Jun 24, 2013 @ 04:34:02

    This one grabbed me.. had to stay up and write a response.

    Peace,

    Stephen

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