Thanks to raysharp.wordpress.com/2012/11/12/snow-poet-trees/
we stood in the snow
coated
pure and simple
white
and I thought
your eyes
said, “love”, even
as I watched the way
your poetic lips
wrapped
around other words
that my ears
turned away
I stood in the snow
still
as the naked oak trees
shivering
in the cold bitter wind.
whimsy~mimsy 
Nov 13, 2012 @ 00:57:35
Exceptional!!
Nov 13, 2012 @ 01:03:50
Thanks!
Nov 13, 2012 @ 03:04:56
I don’t know how to do these pingbacks and such, but the snow has just begun
http://raysharp.wordpress.com/2012/11/12/all-the-flashing/
five months since we kissed
and all the flashing fire flies
have turned to snow flakes
Nov 13, 2012 @ 08:49:33
Nice!
Nov 13, 2012 @ 04:47:25
a dusting of snow
sifts over the charred remains
of a fire that blazed
http://raysharp.wordpress.com/2012/11/12/all-the-flashing/
Nov 13, 2012 @ 08:50:25
Even nicer!
Nov 13, 2012 @ 05:23:23
I love it, Mims. You have done it yet again! Eric
Nov 13, 2012 @ 12:00:34
Just have to read this over and over again to ponder its many facets, a wonderful ice crystal reflecting many rays.
Nov 17, 2012 @ 15:49:13
Heartbreakingly lovely.
Nov 17, 2012 @ 17:05:01
Thanks 🙂
Nov 19, 2012 @ 02:38:08
Very, very good, thought provoking, and I think I’ve done this – but not any more!!
Suzy 😀