Tanka 4.29

warm bread freshly baked

the earth just after spring rains

clothes dried in the sun

a bush laden with lilacs

my sheets still smelling like you

9 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Jay Bleu
    Apr 29, 2020 @ 21:11:22

    Beautiful.

    Reply

  2. sustainabilitea
    Apr 29, 2020 @ 22:11:17

    That last line for some reason reminded me of the way someone who’s lost a spouse keeps a piece or two of unwashed clothing and mourns when the scent of the other is finally gone. (I know, reading too many murder mysteries.)

    janet

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